Carpet is a host to the ground
Sound is an atmosphere in the surrounds sound
Vital vibes ignite vibrant
The gradens blow candles and the skies shift
Cars go (c)loudly crashing in travel conflict
Speed travels faster than light and winds draft is a travel of 'drift'
A contest entry
- Epigrammatically Speaking by Peripatetic.
1500 points, ended November 12, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
GIVE ME YOUR TREASONS
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Wow! No light verse this. The duality of existence is considered in the space-time continuum. Reality is discovered as but a phase of energy massed in a certain frame of matter for not even an instant, constantly reacting to itself and becoming something else. My, oh my!
Picky point: The use of apostrophes in a couple of places would be nice. (World’s vs. Worlds? wind’s vs. winds?)
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I found this very deep and it made me think quite a bit. Interesting indeed and good luck to you
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