She sweeps across the midnight sky
blending lovers into her embrace,
a canvas of indigo setting the stage
where insignificance builds castles in heaven.
She steers her ship and cloaks the fears
that glare beneath sun's rays,
her rudder sure and steady
navigating the night to dawn.
And when the time to weigh her anchor comes
for this mariner of the skies,
she softly croons to her wayward crew
to come dwell within her secure celestial sphere.
Author notes
Word Prompt: Sailor Moon.
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A contest entry
- A Few Options by Leonura.
900 points, ended November 11, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was so soothing having a calming gentle sailing glide ~ 'sailor moon'
La Lune comes to croon then nestles safe in 'celestial sphere'
Bliss
s Gaylene x x
Lib x x
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This is a fantastic write
I love where you've taken your given prompt and wish you the best of luck in this one 
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So soothing and compelling. This is the feeling many must ultimately feel when they gaze up into the night sky at that full moon rising.
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Lovely word so soft and soothing...nice flow and vision...you are amazing and so are your words...
Best always,
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beautiful
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Hello
Hello sailor. But damn is that not one of the ways it was done. My how you capture this reader with such words and thoughts. Just another masterpiece I take for granted.
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