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STAGES STAGED, take two

moon lazer is late call
early bird takes last call
and takes a slice out of your pro-fits...

moonies in the back windows impose bad attitude, commonity and expose humanity

this lighter only flames within sad songs at festivals and live bandings

these bondings of bounties make us show our candies
and show ourselves in a new light: the candle

can you handle this...

the hands, are hans on

the heads are head strong      PEPPERMINT PREP

this is night you sink light in,    REP IN IT, and blanket
mix it in a dark room or on a dj's stage   
                                        spotlight - take it

you are colour composer
and you are also

outrage

    glad rag'in, self express-in

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inspired by lightspeed champion - tell me what it's worth

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  • LeanneBridgewater
    November 10, 2008
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    hi tract'

  • LeanneBridgewater
    November 10, 2008
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    hi tract'


  • Mr Id
    November 10, 2008

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    Wow- very abstract, with a lot of crazy stuff going on here. I like the 'candle, can you handle' bit a lot. It's cool.

    By the way- might want to change the colour. It is pretty horrible to look at and it is difficul to read the links.

    Cool work though!


    • LeanneBridgewater
      November 10, 2008
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      sorry -pressent the ent(e)rance too much then

      i'm glad you read and liked.. thankyou for your words.. changed the col' just for you..
      but i do agree - the links were pretty orrid'y porridge.
      Take care.. catch up a ketchup soon is a must-ard do.
      xx