a flow of stray following my strain
a death'in-vain, a hulk of prey
this gloried day
you'll die in vain
this sac-re' ligious lifeless guardless
life that's hopeless, turned in un-darkness
a foe of fail-ure over the shoulders
worn like a jacket in times of winters
win or lose,
you'll strain a bone,
try or die trying,
or die
or die trying
no-one is knowing the grey
a flow
of stray
following my stain
blood vallied death'in vain... destroyal us
paint the crown to our prey
'pin that tail on the donkey'
Author notes
great song! Superjoint Ritual - Fuck your enemy
A contest entry
- Just in Time For October by realism-vs-romance.
525 points, ended November 13, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
GIVE ME YOUR TREASONS
Comments
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Very good entry, Im also quite beside myself to see that someone used one of the songs I picked.
Good luck!
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allloooore
muchos graci graci, song was a good'en.. thanks for the pick n mix options.. they were sweet(s)
hope contest judging doesn't go too smudgy!
adoos adios
Leanne
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