Emerald Soul
A contest entry
- in two words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 10, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice
Excellent dear poet. Your words show the imagery of the picture nicely. Congratulations on the honorable winner award.
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very resonating
congratulations on quite a level of paired words.
It does portray deeper than color of eyes, but a connection to life. And through gem's description, echoes our chemical makeup circulating {some} changes. reminds me of that spectrum within its concise animation need from Genesis 2:7 "And Jehovah God proceeded to form the man out of dust from the ground and to blow into his nostrils the breath of life, and the man came to be a living soul." Such evocation of such existence you give beyond art...
nice weaving of the mined emphasis~
called Carolyn -
WOW! A Jewel Of A Write! Congratulations on the award!
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just lovely... x
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