as she fell down the rabbit hole
tables and tea-cups blurring past
she thought to herself
"is this what my life has become?"
falling through never-ending dark
not even enough light
to see the drink me
plastered on this poison
Author notes
Option 3- Alice In Wonderland
A contest entry
- "Come to The Darkside.... We Have Cookies!" :D by Werewolf Avarus.
700 points, ended December 2, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive criticism, please?
Comments
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A lovely twist to the fairytale, thank you for the entry.
'Wolf
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Me encanta that title; it's clever.
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Such a great write!Very dark feelings there.Especially coming from Alice In Wonderland!I think the title is very good and I like the words that you chose.Good luck in this contest you did a great job.
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