Lets watch the time pass
Just like we used to laugh
Remember all the times we had
forgetting what we lacked
Back when we sat alone
All about our lonely homes
Back when we used to sing
At least we sang about something
Back when we had a dream
Back when we said it seems
But baby tonight's my last
So lets just
Sit around and let the time pass
Lets sing a song about our misadventures
And sit around and watch the time pass
As we waited for our stories to end
We sat on this front porch
And sing songs about nothing
Making our voice's raw
From all the screaming we've done
But this time we'll come home
To Ourselves alone
Once again we're back
Listening to ourselves laugh
Remember all the times we had
So lets just
Sit around and let the time pass
Lets just sing a song
About our past
And lets just
Sit around and let the time pass
Sit around and let the time pass
Just like we used to
Back in the day and laugh...
Author notes
This song is on my music myspace
please leave comments go listen to the song pleaseeeeeee
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Comments
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Ah..the tone of this poems is very universal and quite philosphical as well..a deep thought is crafted to bring the meaning of this life..well done..
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thank you so much. you comment a lot of my poems and I greatly enjoy hearing your opinion thanks a ton for always taking the time to stop by and leave me a few words.
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I like this alot(:
You guys did a good job on the vid, too.
"As we waited for our stories to end
We sat on this front porch
And sing songs about nothing
Making our voice's raw
From all the screaming we've done"
I loveeee that part.
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thank you so much sorry that it took so long to reply to this. that's definitly one of the key stanza's of the whole work I'm glad to see someone enjoyed as much as me. so thanks alot =]
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I like the lyrics and LOVE the fact that that you put so much effort into the audio but maybe my speakers didn't do justice to your efforts for the sound quality was frenetic...having said that...I would really like to listen to the next presentation of your creativity, it isn't as easy as 123 to get everything syncopated and I readily give you three happy smiling chappy's clapping, great hook line to lets take sometime to pass...
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the quality is poor i need a new mic something terrible at the moment. more musical presentations will be up as soon as i can get proper recording equipment. thanks for stopping by
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very nice... i really liked this
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I really liked the lyrics. I wouldn't have been able to understand what you were singing on the video if the words weren't right in front of me. The guitar could be a little quieter, and maybe a few more chords would help. I didn't hate it, but I think that a few changes could really help bring justice to these cool lyrics.
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sorry about the quality. i forgot to mention that this is just a demo track it's still being messed around with as in the music. the words will not be changed. which is a good thing. thanks for your support and opinion. =]
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This was pretty good...in a heart breaking and emotional reck kind of way.
Loved this line:
"Remember all the times we had
forgetting what we lacked
Back when we sat alone
All about our lonely homes"
Really reminds me off my ex boyfriend
The video wasn't too bad either, good stuff. Keep up with the good work.
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That line wow. I spent a total of about 3 days trying to come up it and it finally busted out of me like a exorcism to be honest. see the guitarist in the track was all the way in germany awaiting to be sent to iraq for the war and he wanted me to write something in the song about the old days that were about the old band and relationships and friendship and all those type of things. It's kinda cool that it reminds someone else of something alittle different then intended. I love your comments all the time dude. THANKS
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Funny thing is, My ex is in Iraq so maybe my connection isn't way too far off what you were going for. and oh yeah you welcome!
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ok ok....... you know.... damn.. I dont know.. how emotionally unstable I am right now just bout everything makes me cry... so yeah I won't lie, this made me cry. I dont even know why really it just did.
I don't have to tell you to keep writing cause I am sure you will... so.... I liked A LOT! I love reading your works.
go listen to the song pleaseeeeeee(RE.-----> I'll do that later when I am at home. OK?)
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Amazing!
It made me cry...Like wow. That was mind-blowing amazing. I hope you keep writing. Your G R E A T at it. !
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I will definitly keep writing. I'm not sure about mind-blowing its rather simple yet from the heart i guess. Thanks for stopping by sorry for making you cry.
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wow. this really is pretty impressive! i likeed it very much. keep writing kays
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Thanks for stopping by. I don't know what else to say you didn't leave much.
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oooft i love it! i want to song it tooo! its ooft amansing! you have a fan
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For You And Everyone else:
There is a second version the long version that we are also doing a collage of video's for please submit you your friends partying at the mall anything just show us some footage and you never know you might get put in email is it_means_fight@live.com
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