accommodating dejection.
Author notes
Picture Credit: pic by Diana faith
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A contest entry
- in two words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 10, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Well written! I believe this is the shortest poem I've read of yours so far. You've managed to convey such strong emotions with only two words. I think the title supplements the poem perfectly. It adds a little more meaning to the piece.
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Wow, only two words yet they speak volumes. Perfect match for the picture!
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this poem caught my eye.
what a hauntingly beautiful picture, and what stunning words to match.
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Oh wow. This was brilliant.
Winning a trophy for this one.
Good luck!
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a fitting title for this picture, keep it flowing
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WOW !
Pulled this one off to perfection
Clever, profound and raw
Best wishes and good luck in the contest
Julie x
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cleverly creative... x
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... Wow. Those were the deepest two words I've read in my life. It's almost as strong as the two words 'Love you' that people say with such depth. It's just as beautiful as the picture that you have up there. Beautiful. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
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Nailed it! (I'll have nightmares about those eyes- thank you very little...)
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