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from the ashes blooms a rose

Flames of innocent purity

smouldered

within a simple heart.

Hopeful that love

and a mere handful of seed

could plant wisely a garden

of life's abundant beauty.

 

Determinations rugged paths

taught early,

jagged decisions and calloused truths.

Testing the flesh of desire,

and spirit of focused courage.

Until...I..fed the fires of my soul.

 

Ablaze in beauty,

fearlessly....vulnerably

learning respect

and igniting capabilities

in others and myself.

 

Not charred or scarred burnt

I sat quietly....

reflecting wise lessons learnt.

Humbled, to still behold

a mere handful of hopeful seed

for a garden of life,

now ready to be planted abundantly.

From the ashes blooms a rose.

 

 

 



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jagged decisions

Author notes

Contest prompt: Lovely poem by Willialm Reichard An Alchemy in the bones....
loved his line...teach me to wear fire.

very inspiring was his poem!
I hope it did it justice...for from the ashes of many fires a rose does blooom magnificently.

picture: talented artistry of glittergraphics.com

A contest entry

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  • Heart Sutra
    November 29, 2008
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    This poem expresses a lot of desire and beauty. Thank you for sharing it with the contest.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    Brilliant!!!

    I love this awesome poem!! Outstanding visuals, use of metaphor, and lovely imagery!! Wishing you the best of luck in the contest, I feel this is a winner!! Peace always, Cyn


  • darell
    November 10, 2008

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    Most elegant

    your words paint a masterpiece of
    illumination upon a canvas of passion
    and romance. Colors leap into reality
    and cover the spirit with the ambrosia
    flavors of a living breathing rose.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    Ears, wow

    You my friend are so versatile! I really like this! Great story, great imagery..and the pic..is beautiful!