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"Empty eyes"

i sit here beside you
everyday
and watch you slowly
slip away
i've cried the tears
and felt the grief
and held together
just for you

i've seen the pain
rake your face
and all the memories
disappears
i hold my hand
over yours
and love you more
every day


our time is running

out i know
the doctors all
tell me so
but i fight for you
within my heart
i hold on tight
to you my love

it isn't easy
for me some days
to get around
to make it here
but long as your
still with me
i'll always find
the strength in me

you've always been
my solid rock
now its my turn
to be yours
the years may fade
and you'll forget
and emptiness
will fill your eyes

but i'll be there
at your side
when it comes time
to say goodbye











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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    Such a sad write. True emotion and depth of real feeling here of how hard it is to have to say the final goodbye.


  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    November 10, 2008

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    wow

    this poem is very very sad. you used beautiful words in this poem. our time is running

    out i know
    the doctors all
    tell me so
    but i fight for you
    within my heart
    i hold on tight
    to you my love

    it isn't easy
    for me some days
    to get around
    to make it here
    but long as your
    still with me
    i'll always find
    the strength in me

    Thoses are my favorite lines. you used them beautifully!!! they make me want to cry! WONDERFUL POEM..WONDERFUL!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 10, 2008
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    "Empty eyes"

    Let me know if that works for you, otherwise I can give another