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She had the most purist golden soul
and his purity was exactly like hers
nothing in this world mattered to them
lust made them the way that they were.
Then along came the darkest soul
sent down to retrieve what once belonged to him
the devil wanted her soul in hell
but this war purity was going to win
so they had no choice as they layed down
slowly they sliced one anothers wrists
she whispers to him "i love you"
it was then they shared their final kiss,
There was no way he was going to let her go
to a place full of misery and pain
so the best thing was to take her away
to where their love would forever remain.

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