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Night Pleasure

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Embracing the golden moon of blue
while caressing your turgid glory.
Sultry longing; expectations of you
parted my thighs to loves story.

Consuming lips taught us both trust
our bodies curves; then spoke sass.
Desires expressed in silent lust
pleasure, passion spanked my ass.

Riding each gaudy wave; no stopping
we grabbed for more, more, more.
The moon, stars started dropping
hints; when from you came a roar.

Screams of ecstasy you poured into me
an unforgettable night down by our sea.

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 12, 2008
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    you are a fine mistress of this sexy genre.. great poem good luck


  • forty-one
    November 11, 2008

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    This was nice, very nice. A pleasant piece of Erotica to read... with just the right amount of...
    sass. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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  • raingoddess gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    Sensual, this is a very sensaul poem, you take the reader on a trip with you, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.

    raingoddess

  • mcfreeman
    November 10, 2008
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    Beautiful imagery....


    • ennovy silver member
      November 10, 2008
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      An a vivid imagery I might add...this is one of many I have culled from dreams...and stories I have written.....thank you for reading...

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