I feed from the dish of discontent
the food turned moldy and rancid
how I wish for a home cooked meal
rich with what I lack
a spiritual banquet of the heart
then, would I feast on the platter of life
A contest entry
- your soul beats on a platter by Melissa Gayle.
1000 points, ended November 23, 2008, 13 entries
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Succinct.
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I always enjoy short writes
The essesense of our humanity in its' discontent and unending ,unsatisfied hunger for peace in our life is evidenced here. I would like to see it centered a bit more on the theme of the contest but the core is here and I enjoyed your write. Nicely done!
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I just love the idea caught in here...spiritual banqueting, yes indeed lol and good luck
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