Let me to enter there
where worms of so many species graze,
don't close the doors for me;
where I die;
without pain or poetry;
without clock,
sitting on the last bench of my verses.
Let me be in there,
where there's no haze in the word;
where the body
feels the balance of wide-awaken eyes;
where the mortals
have their own heart beating.
Let me be there
where I can't deny an aqua from a stanza
to calm the thirst of so many dreams.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: Supplication
A contest entry
- Individual Prompts by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended November 15, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like where you took this prompt! I also like the imagery and slight abstract feel here. Find this very powerful and deep
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"Supplication"
Let me know if that works for you, otherwise another may be given
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