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Virgin Snowfall

Every virgin snowfall is a spectacle.
Tiny crystalline drops with a myriad patterns
Surround us in the purest of fantasylands.
I am glad to share this night with you
Because your gentle lips taste as sweet
As the delicate snowflakes that rest upon my tongue.

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Starstruck

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  • StarGrrl
    November 10, 2008
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    Nice poem. Love the imagry,good luck in the contest.