Why do you hate me.
Could you love me ?
And me not know? No!
There is no hope,
no chance of that ever happening.
I hate it that you know I'm miserable.
Your inpulses act as if you could care less.
I hate how you ignore me
knowing how much I want to talk to you.
Ignoring is what you do best
when you feel like you can't do anything else.
I hate it how you make me cry every single
night without you knowing it
I'd rather wound myself than
to let you know I have cried many tears over you.
I also hate how we live so
many miles apart from one another.
Maybe that is what drove you away from me.
Noone will ever know.
The worse fact of all is
that I love you more than you' ll ever know.
And that's hard for me to tell
you that because i know you don't
love me back.
The sleepness nights
of wondering of what the hell I did wrong.
Why do you hate me so much,
I guess I will never know.
What did I do to force so
much anger upon your weak heart.
Shoot down the walls of
boundry let someone in
and heal your broken wings
Let me love you to the fullest,
let me love you like you have
never been loved before.
And then you will see what love is all about .
All I ask is why do you hate me so much?
Author notes
I wanted to say this to someone so bad but i just can't seem to get it to him, afraid he might get mad at me even more. So i just vented it out here in a poem.
I hope it's okay?
Amanda Norton
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Feeling a lil' helpless and a bit hurt . Let me know what you think?
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id give it an 8
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Thank you, Sorry it made you sad though.
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Oh honey I am so sorry
Loss of comunications is the hardest for any couple to overcome . Have you ever thought of leaving it where he can get it and read it this way at least you know he knows and if it is meant to be he will come and if not then at least you know you gave it your all .Maybe it was the way he was brought up like my husband his family never showed affection and it wasnt because he didnt love me enough he just didnt know how . I so hope you find a way
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i get a sence of great confusion when i read this. it feels almost repetive. but contains such strong feelings. thank you for entering.
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i loved thi it was so in depth...you covered everything!!! thank you
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wow, I love it! It seems a lot like what I went through last year...I finally wrote him a 4-page letter explaining it all...and now we've been going out for 3 months today. I hope everything works out.
Much Love and Keep Writing,
~Alicia Lynn
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Thanks for commenting.
This is a very difficult relationship that i talk about here in this poem. And it's even hard for me to describe it for you here as i am replying to your comment. Some things are difficult and guys are are hard hearded and very stubborn. Sometimes it takes more than just saying " Hey look i love you" I mean you actually have to sit them down and tell them what is on your mind and what is in your heart. But sometimes even that doesn't help.
But thanks for your blessings.
-Mandi
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