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Bounce

Love
What does it mean?
And how strong is it?
How far can it be stretched?
Does it bounce?
If so...
Does it bounce back?

Love
From me to you
It was pretty strong
It got pretty stretched
It bounced and bounced
And it did come back
But then it rolled away

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    Creative you are...love is hard and often more work then one can handle...and how far it stretches before it breaks is never know until it happens...I love the ending line...and rolling away it does, yet I believe another door opens to love once it does...
    nicely done...thank you for the thoughts...
    Love,


  • FreeTara
    November 10, 2008

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    No matter how hard we try we either have to work our butts of for it to keep flowing or it will bounce far away