Why did she do that?
i feel like i should destroy
destroy all the things that remind me of her
she thought many things
but they were not real
those accusations are fake
but she believes they are real
i feel like destroying myself.
tearing my skin from my muscles
and burning my muscles so they just fall right off
i want to tear my heart out
to see if it is broken
because i feel it is breaking
with every waking second away from her
i cant see anything without her.
i loved her so much
but now i cant feel it anymore.
im too numb to know if i still do
its so hard to think like that
but its true for me
i cant believe it,
but it happened anyway.
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Burningchild
A contest entry
- Can you make me feel? (now open to PWs) by glitterydoom.
550 points, ended November 16, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wat u think bout this
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SO F-ING AMAZING!!!!!!
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Who is this about? It's really good. So deep and real, I feel like I can relate
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yes, destroying all evidence does help, believe it or not, like that Spotless Mind movie. Just throw all souvenirs and photos out, it's the best medicine for getting over a break-up.
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aww I'm sorry someone hurt you like this. But its often from the hurt that comes the best poems. I loved this. thankyou for entering my contest
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yea who is this chick, u dont need to feel that way bro.
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who is this about? who were you dating? do i know her? anyway im really sorry u feel like this. it really sucks when the one u love leaves you me and shelby figured that out. anyways im here if u need to talk..
lissa
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