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my familys

im very luck.
i have two familys.
im closer to my ap family then my real family.
my real family is me my mom dad and sister.
my sister and i fight.

i have a bunch of ap sisters
and great relationship with them.
i love talking to my lil brother.
my ap family is slowly growing and i love them all.

i injoy family and it means a lot to me.
i have an ap daughter.
and cant wait to have my own.

family is important for many reasons.
the biggest is -
they are a built support system.
they love you uncontitionaly.

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this is what family means to me. i would love to be a neice if you like.

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  • Crazy9Piano8Freak
    December 5, 2008

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    Well, this is a very good poem. and I love the last stanza. Although you may want to do some spellchecks and look at capitalization. that's all I'd like to say in that sense. Wonderful write I love it! Thank you so much for your entry and good luck!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Awww it is great to have 2 family's, a very sweet write. I think you'll find all siblings argue, not sure why but as you get older it becomes less and less until your best friends. All the best in the contest with it


  • dustytiger
    November 19, 2008

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    this is really sweet, i like how you wrote about both your families in this, it's very heart warming, best of luck in the contest

  • Black Rayne
    November 13, 2008
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    So much truth in so few words,
    thank you so much for this entry