They mingled playfully,
Innocence amidst
As admiring glances were cast
Hearts were light this listful night
Amid the moonlight banter
They sat upon the balcony
Beneath the romantic glow
"Come love, shall you dance with me?"
He spoke to woo her so
And they danced together slowly
to the sight of all below
They fell deeper into their affections
As the put on an extravagant show
He fell in love with the woman that night
Though he knew not her name
Charmed by her stunning beauty and wit
Her presence such a delight
Nigh on nights end, she departed from him
Casting one last smile
The lovers departed, to meet again
There hearts dazed all the while
Author notes
My inspiration started with the way arabic people connect the moon with love. it continued by listening to Apocalyptica
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so much love! i really like the first part:
They mingled playfully,
Innocence amidst
As admiring glances were cast
Hearts were light this listful night
Amid the moonlight banter
the taste of innocence is sweet....lol
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A very well written piece nothing like a good Moonlight for a romantic night.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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ahhhhhh i loved it ur imagination is so weird sometimes. great job baby
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*hugs and kisses* ur loving gf.
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lol. i got the idea "moonlight banter" in my head and im like "whats banter mean?" lol
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it just is. its a good weird. what does banter mean? u never told me.
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banter - Good-humored, playful conversation.
to speak in a playful or teasing way
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riiiight im lost
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lol. sorry
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*eavesdrops* wow kyren... lol
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wow what? lol
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notttttthing nothing at all....I'm just amused
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oh brittney!.....i spelt ur name wrong. im never gonna get it. lolz. srry! y r u amused?
and this is tay, btw. i hacked into kyrens AP.
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lol everyone does. np lol. hahahaha funny
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never!
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