I've pushed real hard,
I've come so far,
and now i've fallen down.
But one thing,
I know for sure,
I will not hang around.
I will get back on my feet,
I will show them who i am.
I'll reach that flag,
one day, you'll see.
Because that's what I demand.
I'm reaching high,
Into the sky.
I can almost
touch the clouds.
I look at my apponents,
as their smiles
turn to frowns.
I've come so far,
I've pushed so hard.
I'm rounding
The last bend.
I'm almost there,
I'm in the lead,
I'm nearly at the end!
I've done this well,
Thanks to a friend,
who told me
something true.
And now my frind,
I'd like to say,
"Thanks" and "I O U"
He told me how
to fight for it.
How to reach that cup.
Three small words
Explained it all.
What he said was,
""NEVER GIVE UP!!!!""
A contest entry
- Never Give Up (1000 Points) Lots of HMs by sOuL.
750 points, ended December 14, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh by the way, you spelled clouds wrong in line 15
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I love This!!! Sometimes i will tri something once and fail. Then when i try again, i suceed. You hit the point perfectly. Goodjob!! Check out the story prologe under poems!!
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Kewlies
I know you dont care bout the comments. But it is very well written. Catchya l8r
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