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The City of Tomorrow

Glowing, intrinsic
Thought patterns cease

Writhing, refusing
To feed the beast

Electronic pulses lead me to feel
A vacancy in society
    What is even real?

A cold mechanical gloom
In the garden of Eden
    Anxiety abloom

Sticky fluid of cerebral refuse
Drips and builds puddles underneath
The creature upon a throne
With greed and fear for teeth

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STILL WORKING ON IT! Just an idea I had while working on yet another failed attempt at poetry.
I dunno. I lost all ability. -_-

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