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Close your eyes,
And find the breath,
Of another among you.

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Interpretation???

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  • Melodies
    November 11, 2008

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    This means that someone is about to get kissed. I like the idea very much, sort of... well... depending. LOL Clever poem, good poet!


  • Lj-
    November 10, 2008
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    I think...
    this means to trust someone.


  • FreeTara
    November 10, 2008

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    The breath of a loved one or a soulmate as the air around them is shared by your love being expressed together as one person.... I think


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    A ghost? ...lol.
    hmmm or could be a prayer
    otherwise, i think i agree with scyphon...a soulmate


  • Scyphon
    November 9, 2008

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    Stop within this world and find the one who breathes with you, whose heart beats with yours. Finding ones soulmate

  • kendhal22
    November 9, 2008

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    This good

    Nine months prepartions of eyes shut
    A new life in the mother's womb
    Breathing new life of a newborn. Kendhal22

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