The deepest love I have for you is hiding
In my heart, you’ll find it buried in a heap
You know it’s all there, so just keep trying
My love for you is more than skin deep
So come home now
Because, my life is just so blank when you are away
My baby boo, he’s somewhere to be found
So don’t keep me waiting up for you
Because it’s true, I want to see my sweet Marshal boo
My love, my baby boo
I didn’t know it’d be this hard
I promised I’d be a strong base to come home to
But without you I start to crumble
You are my strength that keeps me going, only you
Ohhh, so come home now
Because my life is just so blank when you are away
My baby boo, he’s somewhere to be found
So, don’t keep me waiting up for you
Because it’s true, I want to see my sweet Marshal boo
My love, my baby…
My life’s a heap
Only makes it hard to sleep
Because you’re not here to make me dream
Until you come home, I will lie and weep
Because, my life is just so blank when you are away
My baby boo, he’s somewhere to be found
So don’t keep me waiting up for you
Because it’s true, I want to see my sweet Marshal boo
Because, my life is just so blank when you away
My baby boo, he’s somewhere to be found
So don’t keep me waiting up for you
Because it’s true, I want to see my sweet Marshal boo
My love, my baby boo
Author notes
THE SONG: Fall for you, by secondhand serenade
My BF left for the military for 5 months 
A contest entry
- Write A Beautiful Love Poem by misticmoonlite.
1000 points, ended November 10, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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i really like how u have kept baby boo throughout this peice, it read very easily, i feel the emotion! well done x
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thank you very much
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Title-9 this was a good title considering the story line that your BF left for the military! it's so sad and i hope you find happiness while he is away!
Flow-9.5 this poem had really nice flow and it actually sounded like a song!
Rules-10 well, you followed the rules!
Creativity-9 i enjoyed the way you changed the stanzas throughout the poem, very unique!
Song-9 great song to pick for this poem!
Total-46.5
great job!! -
beautiful song
I loved this as a song with music to serenade him with will be the icing on the cake thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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