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A bit of a thinker

It calls to me, it seeks and asks
But I can't hide behind my masks,
Can't hide behind the marks, the scars
and I'm not blinded from the stars.

A contest entry

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  • Vera Rich
    November 21, 2008

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    Thank you for entering this. I have to say, though, I do find it a little general - it could refer to any kind of thinker, not specifically a poet. However, I shall put it on the list for final appraisal, which I hope to complete either today or Monday.


  • HpWICKEDangel
    November 9, 2008
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    short and to the point.

  • Arjuna-
    November 9, 2008

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    There is A Lot hiding between the lines, here. This is very interesting. It makes me think of my political views, and how for so long I felt I had to hide them for fear of ridicule, but now I no longer can hide. This is great!