The clouds tremble and fall;
their vapors weep
and their reason flutters to the ground.
I wandered the earth unmoved
a summer swan trying to feel the storm ~
and now I wither
In the quiet arms of this silent space
A flaming shadow roaming like a dream
in a world I've never touched alone...
Author notes
Prompt: the above picture http://paperplease.deviantart.com/art/End-Of-The-Road-101072311
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt #7 by Aussie Gypsy.
900 points, ended November 15, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is so well written, I am left with a hard decision now, brilliant!. Best to you in the contest
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Wonderful! One of the best I think I have ever read of yours!Such a 'real' take on this picture.
All the best with this hun
gaylene
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Wow.. that is an outstanding take on the picture! Bookmarking!!
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