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My hand is open

My hand is open
to life and to life's lessons.
I am here to learn.

My palm is open
and I want to speak with you
and not with anger.

My hand is open
to give my understanding,
extending respect.

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  • Arjuna-
    November 9, 2008
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    This is a lovely poem. It has such a tranquil tone, and it almost feels like a meditation.


  • Janice M Pickett
    November 9, 2008

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    Thank you for such a lovely entry. It's amazing just how much an outstretched hand can mean to someone in need.