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~~ Aint She Sweet! ~~

With the help of Merlin
I went back in history.
For the FAB four you love so much
were up in arms you see.

They didn't like the way
you were treating their British fans.
So Paul, John, Ringo and George
came up with a fab plan.

After we had been on a
MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR.
Doing the hippy hippy shake
Lennon piped up "Worry dear no more.

Do you want to know a secret?"
I nodded, "Oh, yes please,"
as he whispered in my ear
Paul sang, "AINT SHE SWEET."

Getting back to Hilly, Emma,
Lily, Wayne and Jules.
We watched through our crystal ball
at our mystical ruse.

As it unfolded smoothly
like a honey treat.
Knowing they would get theirs soon
we watched the Blue-coats leap -

as they danced to the Beatles,
singining TWIST & SHOUT!
Thinking they had got us,
that their plan had neatly panned out.

We promptly disappeared,
right before their eyes.
Magical snowmen they had
ambushed wearing a disguise.

Made to look like us,
they merged into a blanket of white.
On the night the Blue-coats
thought they had one up in the fight.

As the moon shone her light,
making the snow shimmer and sing.
A message appeared in the snow
for the SNOWBALL KING!

"Pick on the Brits you'll have
a REVOLUTION on your hands.
Put down your snowballs
for you do not stand a chance.

We are the fab four,
the BEATLES - if you please,
before the winter is out
the Brits will have you on your knee's.

We stand at the side of our
BRITISH kith and kin.
with our help the Redcoats
are sure to win."

Mugwump fainted
at what she had seen.
The King pinched himself,
he was sure it was a dream.

Joann was with us
helping us out,
the one they had we'd
cloned with MERLIN'S help.

My son looked at Earl and said,
"WHO AMBUSHED WHO?
OH MY GOD THE KING IS DEAD!
WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO?"

"That's ELVIS PRESLEY,"
Earl, said with a sigh.
"Can't you see Dionte I am
well and truly alive?"

D shook his head,
in such a sorry state,
he took himself away
and started to meditate.

As our crystal ball clouded,
making our way to our retreat,
My posse sang their little song for me,
"AINT SHE SWEET!"

Author notes

Keep them coming hon, whoohoo

In response to this > http://allpoetry.com/poem/4752517

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  • DogFish silver member
    April 11
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    "AINT SHE SWEET!"Great song choice for your title!(though I don't think that is on the list...) No matter I think you covered them all in your poem, anyways! But I do love the FAB4's cheesy old version of that old "chestnut"! I've got it here on an old 33rpm- and my wife and I still fish out once in a while for a listen and a smile!


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    April 4
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    Quite the little story here, very imaginative.

    All the best,

    mj.


    • onesugar gold member
      April 5
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      Thank you for reading and commenting
      Valued and appreciated
      ~sugar~


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 4

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    ooh that reminds me, twist and shout was a great song!!!
    have it in my head now


    • onesugar gold member
      April 4
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      Glad you enjoyed, the BEATLES sure are the best
      ~sugar~

  • midnightblue1272
    November 10, 2008
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    *chuckle*

    Very nice, sis. I like the references to some music icons of the past. Fine work.


    • onesugar gold member
      November 10, 2008
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      So glad you enjoyed bro
      As always I appreciate you reading
      Love & your sis ~sugar~


  • Dark Otter
    November 10, 2008

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    She's having fun now!

    Creative, funny and a nostalgic trip to the late 60's and early 70's. Music and snowball madness, what a wonderful combination.


    • onesugar gold member
      November 10, 2008
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      Fun, I'm having a blast...glad you enjoyed.
      Appreciate you reading as always
      Love ~sweetness~ xxx


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    Wow hun keep them coming
    Rock on those snow balls
    What a hoot !
    Love Julie

    • onesugar gold member
      November 10, 2008
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      i have them stock piled
      Never fear the KING is going down LMAO
      Appreciate you reading, glad you enjoyed
      Love Chelle

  • twodie4
    November 10, 2008

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    I know I commented on this when you left it as a comment, but this is just so funny. Come on the fab four, that is all I have to say, the KING is going down. lol Very creative hon.
    Love Emma


    • onesugar gold member
      November 10, 2008
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      Thanks hon, he is definately going DOWN!

      Glad you enjoyed, now pass us that snowball LOL!

      love Chelle


  • FlamesDragoness
    November 9, 2008

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    laughing....oh..i loved that....wasn't that a wonderful
    snow fight and journey!
    I am excited for the snow to arrive this year...and
    when it does...will grab my Beatles album...yes..I
    still have those..and sing....mightily!

    wonderful, wonderful!
    ears/Seattle
    way to tickle us!

    • onesugar gold member
      November 10, 2008
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      Just love the Beatles, I am so glad you enjoyed this.

      You can't beat a little silliness, to brighten up a cold day.

      ~sugar~


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    Sugar is on the warpath time to buckle down
    will the redcoats win this time
    or the yankees with their bluecoats
    only time will tell my friends
    only time will tell


    wonderfully done Sugar as always


    • onesugar gold member
      November 9, 2008
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      Thanks hon

      All good fun, all good fun. LOL!

      I appreciate you reading as always
      ~sugar~

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