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my hand, personified

like mother bird's claws:

when one stem of pinnate leaves
isn't enough to fly,

I'll heavilly help you

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Commodore Rouge
    November 10, 2008

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    Oh, powerful! Just like the title of your contest, I feel the "meaning" and "emotion"! For such a simple piece, your words speak for themselves. Lovely. Congrats on winning that trophy today!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    Nice job

    Very good this piece keep up your writing


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 9, 2008
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    This is so creatively expressive and attention grabbing... x