A Phoenix rises over the east
Sacrificing the darkness above --
Brilliant holy flames are
lighting dreams
Sorrows is singed, regrets become cremated.
Ashes of the old will scatter,
Unveiling rebirth.
A contest entry
- look deep. by Ryno.
600 points, ended November 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Just whatever! by Beautiful-N-Broken.
700 points, ended October 25, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh wow I really love this. Thank you so much for sharing this with me and good luck in the contest with this brilliant write!! I give you major kudos on this write hun!!
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oh, this is a very abstract way of looking at things. i wont go in deep right now, just wanna enjoy the creativity of this well crafted piece of art. much love
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I really liked this, actually. When I saw the title it seemed kind of epic, and I thought, oh no, it is going to be some kind of science fiction 848349239290320230 worded poem.
Instead, it was quite the opposite of what I thought.
To me, I read of someone letting their emotions, caged inside, free....like a "bird" from the cage. And what better metaphor then a phoenix burning away, destroying those wrotten emotions.
Pretty well penned
Thanks for the entry.
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wow i like the theme of this, it's very very deep, and quite powerful, i just don't feel like there is enough to it somehow, best of luck in the contest
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