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Home Again

Weary weary traveler
Cometh, lie, and rest
Thy journey now is over
Thou finishéd thy test

Heareth sweetest music
Drinketh sweetest wine
Looketh 'pon the ladies
Dressed in linen, fine

Let the gentle sunrise
Warm thy weary face
Thou kneweth horrid danger
But now knoweth purest grace

Author notes

Inspired by Lord of the Rings, Return of the King.. When the hobbits go back home.
Written February 1st, 2004

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  • February 6, 2004
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    Well done! Has a nice ring meter to it. Not sci fi in nature but I could see the references now that I read the author's comments.

    See the old english references too.