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mourning


The Night wept white in silence of November's vanquished song.





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option III - one liner

Their love affair ended all too soon, now all that's left to show, is a frosty morn.
Sandi Alford

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  • bird-mad girl
    November 11, 2008

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    A very powerful and poetic one liner. It was so elegant and swam around me, capturing all my atoms with tiny, icy fingers.

    I don't know how to explain the way this piece made me feel, trembling and aching, but it's consuming.

    thank you so much for entering and joining snowflakes!


    • Sandi Alford gold member
      November 12, 2008
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      Thank you for these gracious comments!
      I love to write snippets of thought, sometimes I find a use for them in something larger.

      And thanks for letting me in, from what I've been reading so far, we've got some wonderfully creative writers in the group!

      from Holland
      blessings, Sandi