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Waiting

The beauty lay awake
inside the haunted house
outside the gounds
the wolf's cry she heard

she knew he was so close
death now approached

she was damned by the reflection of her soul
to hell she was condoned
by the mirror that lay above
for a mirror always remembers

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Picture Credit: http://zemotion.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Angel-69859594
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  • chilali
    November 10, 2008

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    Wow. You've mixed both options and written this! Very nciely written. I really enjoyed it a lot. Thank you so very much for your entry and best to you in the contest