she’s asleep
shadows from
the tv play
out her dreams
across the walls.
i giggle, alcohol
skipping
across my lips.
Author notes
20 words.
critque them.
peace to all ~flight
A contest entry
- meaning and emotion by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 10, 2008, 16 entries
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This is deeply profound and incredibly vivid... x
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