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* Blissfully happy *

Been married twice...a battered wife
Now found soul mate to share my life

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  • Margaret Denham gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    Truth is always the best form of poetry. Remember what I was told by you know who...write from your heart...and you did

    Love you


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    Well done

    so much with so few words


  • Anu-Nataraj
    November 10, 2008

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    i noticed you read the rules..thank u so much for that..

    now for the poem...............

    AMAZING !!!

    two lines and it says everything!!!

    good luck in the contest and life !

    Anagha-Nataraj


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    Just wonderful You deserve happiness hun
    Gaylene


  • HopelessDreams
    November 9, 2008

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    Oh my goodness, this was so unexpectedly short and to the point!! Good luck in the contest!


  • thejollytinker
    November 9, 2008

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    Can't rectify my mind to a man that hits. Makes me think really bad things, consequences. Hope this is fiction, Jules.


    • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
      November 9, 2008
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      Thanks for your comment and no it's not fiction unfortunately. All in the past tho thankfully but NEVER forgotten. I appreciate your comment and happp s


  • rbruce gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    All I can say is; bless you!

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