daughter's sick day voice ~
resembled friend's second child
appearance narrates...
imagine mine;
didn't feel like healing:
her
undisciplined yeast yes
A contest entry
- meaning and emotion by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 10, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes
Comments
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Such a thought provoking and uniquely grasping piece ~ I've read this a few times over to ignite the concept of your voice... x
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SummerGypsy your staying with it means much
-- strewn for me to write, and it got notched by my entering but engraved with your review at least
thanks, I'm sorry my power was only in flashing checkmark per se ~
called Carolyn
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