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[Title Needed]

Trust in love for love will giveth
Tender warmth in cold
And giveth stories just for thee
For thee, when thou art old

Taketh of my truthful heart
The love that thou doth seek
To carry thee in times of hate
To comfort times of bleak

Dreameth of a love so dear
Appearing for thine eyes
And sleepeth thee so peacefully
Without thy fearful cries.

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HELP! This needs a title desperately. Give me ideas!
Written February 1st, 2004

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  • February 6, 2004
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    Love Will Giveth.

    Very intelligent poem; good meter as well.