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Toy Box

They can hear you
They can see you

Doesn't it make you scared?
To know that life isn't private

I can hear them
I can see them

The noises in the walls
The faces in the dark

They tell me everything
They show me more

Your lies and filth
Its all mine now

I hide them away
Hide them in my toy box

They can be free there
They can live there

I can feed them
I can breed them

They will be with me
They will stay with

They are mine
They are mine

In the toy box
They can stay

Forever with me
Forever they will stay

I will add you to them
To the forgotten ones

You can feed with me
You can breed with me

In my toy box
You will stay

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  • Do I look good
    December 28, 2008
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    well i really liked it. It was more on the topic of scary than sad. But its still great work.


  • ASmileForYou
    December 17, 2008

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    Yes! I kind of got some chills there! The last six lines add so much to this poem. Very nice!! Thank you!!!


  • xXxMandy-pantsxXx
    November 10, 2008
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    *in aww*