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all hope is lost.



slipping into insanity,
and abandoned by gravity.




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Write a couplet.
This must rhyme. Two lines with an AA rhyme.

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  • Rhythm Child
    November 23, 2008
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    i think both are rather inevitable in the end
    a great write

  • carole21
    November 18, 2008
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    nicely done . . good luck in the contest !!


  • aanika
    November 12, 2008
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    nice.
    lol I have nothing else to say, really.


  • adsaige
    November 10, 2008

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    Oh, yes...I most definitely agree...insanity does have its perks...especially when you have no reason, and gravity no longer imposes on you.