Scissors cut out this delicate gift,
the crayons dance the waltz.
Name inscribed,
her hands place the gift in his.
Not beating,
but alive.
Her eyes match his
her lips quiver as the words build up
"i love you";
as she hands him the paper heart.
Author notes
2. "You believe but what you see. You recieve but what you give."~Amaranth, Nightwish.
A contest entry
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Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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this reminds me of young love, nice job poet....thanks for entering
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Wow, this is a really creative take on the prompt. I enjoyed reading and thanks for entering. ♥
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This is lovely, tentative love, but love all the same. I like it lots. >:3
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. Thank you so much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
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I like this, applies to the real world, and its very cute. Very befitting of my beautiful little lady =D
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CUUUUUTTTTE! haha. makes me think of you and nicona. haha. probly what you did it for. i like this poem. great job! good luck in the contest!
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