Slowly contemplate how to die and cry a little tear from that blood stained eye.
'I don't love you.'
Cut another line on that scared and empty wrist.
'They could care less as long as someone will bleed'
Find the music, make a disk, whats wrong with taking a risk.
'Can you see my eyes are shining bright, cause i'm out here on the other side.'
I put my earphones in my ears and listen to mcr.
I think about the people, the great ones that live so far.
They make me feel they need me, more than i need them.
I feel i have a purpose, toward those five little men.
'I'm okay now!'
Thank You Mikey,Gerard,Frank,Bob,Ray.
You helped me find another way.
Through the fire and the flames of those famous last words.
'I don't love you'
Through the people that have never cared.
'They Could care less as well as someone will bleed.'
You told me there you cared.
'Maybe they'll leave you alone, but not me.'
Finding the light in the music.
'Can you see my eyes are shining bright, cause i'm out here on the other side.'
Then you came along and showed me the light. Saved my life a thousand times.
' I'M OKAY NOW!'
Author notes
*Be yourself, don't take any-ones shit and Never Let Them Take You Alive*
2.How they've saved your life, or made a impact on it.
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Find the music, make a disk, whats wrong with taking a risk
I loved this line, it had a great rhythm and was so dark and vindictive
I also loved how you finished but i wont copy n paste it xD
Brilliantly worded write x -
pretty amazing. i went through a really bad break-up so i can relate to that. he was my first boyfriend ever so i felt like he didn't care when he left me so someparts of your poem really stand out to me. Keep writing and good luck!
~Raven Evangeline Nevermore
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I chuckled slightly at the 5 little men line
I probably shouldn't but I couldn't get the image of the seven dwarfs out of my head.
I like it muchly, and I like the way you interpreted the lyrics into the piece.
goodluck,
x.
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Lol, Frank: Bashful
Bob: Grumpy
Gerard: Happy
Mikey: Sleepy
Ray: Dopey
Then the other two can be random groupys
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Oh my, you make me rofl
The other two can be you and me
What are the other two anyways?
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Haha yeah!
It's Doc and Sneezy.
I do know my snow white
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It is very nice
to have friends that want to help. Sometimes love does not last forever and that is not anyones fault. We learn and grow at different paces. Sometimes we grow apart, but that doesn't meen that someone does not get hurt. Keep your chin up because you got a lot of life left! I found my wife when I was 32. I had been married before and had to leave my two kids with the x-wife. It broke my heart, but now many years later, I have a gtreat relationship with my kids. I thought my life was over, but it was not. I know a better life is out there and you will find it! Good luck, The Shaker
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