A moment of contact 'tween gender and gender,
a sweet sound of conquest; we win by surrender!
A contest entry
- Couplets... by Lj-.
400 points, ended November 23, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sorry dericlee, I guess I need a new prescription! Let alone computer know-how. To make it even worse, I'm very dyslexic. As for your verse, it seems you practice well what you preach.
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I wouldn't worry about it; my month would hardly be complete if someone didn't call me 'deridee' at least once.
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Surrender...well...I don't want to make any comments on that...I have done so recently, and the results were not resounding with saccharine conquest!
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Well...you realize that in this context, it has to be mutual to work, right?
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I know...I know...just applying to its relativity to my recent tete-a-tete
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A lovely coupling. How sweet the surrender.
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Very succinctly put! Good luck in the contest (Touch Wood; meaning good luck in England)
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Thanks, Cyne. It's hard for me to write short stuff like this...at least the word 'couplet' meant I could use r&m.
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