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This Quietude

in measured silence,
heartfelt violence.

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 7
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    Your open ended words allow us to create our own stories. Very compelling.

    Shari


  • adsaige
    November 10, 2008

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    This can mean so many things, honestly. I can definitely see this as being a protest against abuse. Good luck.