I knew it was you
the first time I saw you in your night suit
you looked terribly adorable
you spoke as though the world rested at your foot
Whenever I think About You
I imagine a future 'US'
but you're so far away :'(
.....my tears I brush
You complete me
I am 'Yin' & you are 'Yang'
I want to be yours
....take my hand
You are the missing jigsaw
that completes my puzzle
I shall stand next to you forever
even on a rainy day drizzle
Cross the road of life
with tears and laughs
bu t will stand by you
'cause you're my other half
Author notes
:'(.My other half is far away from me right now. :'(
A contest entry
- My other half by Angelo di Luce.
400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 20 entries
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Comments
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This is a nice piece of work, very sincere and heartfelt..but it is TOO long to be in the contest...the contest requires that your entry only contain one line. Sorry but I must DQ this piece.
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So far and yet so near
I like that
Thank you for your entry
Nicely done
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