Freedom's Doorway

As I walked through the doorway of freedom,

once in I never looked back;

one step brought me straight through illusions,

in one moment my life was on track.

I rose above life's distractions,

embracing the ease of what is;

carrying my own inspiration,

accepting what one moment gives.

Now every moment is living,

joy is the gift that it sings;

music's alive as my soul thrives,

I bask in the light that it brings.

Author notes

David Cook: Time Of My Life

RHYMING TO YOUR FAVORITE SONG!!!!!! by cbsbecm88. 550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 17 entries
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Denerica
December 3, 2008
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OOOHHHH I love this one...the ups and downs, but also overcoming...blessings my dear friend.
goalsv
November 9, 2008
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Wonderful write, nice take on the prompt.
Puppydog
November 9, 2008

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HELLO KATHLEEN
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! 's If one can ever find freedom of mind and heart they have found it all.'s
who iam
November 9, 2008
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Your composition is alive with the vibrance of knowning each moment counts!.Very nicely done!
Swangrnv
November 9, 2008
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Sweet!
MMM..such a lovely melody you sing to and i'm welcoming the warmth created by your sunshine!
cbsbecm88
November 9, 2008
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Title-7.5 title goes with poem but not really with the song

Flow-9 very nice flow!

Rules-10 well, you followed the rules!

Creativity-9 very unique and creative!

Song-7.5 again the poem was very good and the song is amazing (i love david cook!) but the poem didn't really match the song that well

Total-43

thanks for entering! good job and good luck!