One Sunday morning
I thought-I wish autumn was here
looked out the uncleaned window
I saw the leaves on the ground
although withered and dead
it gave a clear sign
A smile lit my face
and I whispered...
Autumn's here .... =]
Author notes
Autumn Rocks !
A contest entry
- QUICKIE: seasons [2/4] by etoile.
550 points, ended November 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do u think of my poem ?
Comments
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autumn's my least favourite season, and by reading your poem it made it seem a bit better, which is good cause now i don't hate it as much
i liked the imagery in this short piece and the storyline and your take on the prompt was good too.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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