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Winter Reigns

Winter
began not so mellow
drenched in withery snowflakes
of a hundred degrees or so below
nine coats did not satisfy the weather
we faced the immense windy blows together
A barista in the distance I did see
walked right upto it
and ordered
a cup of
coffee !

=D


Author notes

I feel quickies are what Im into from now on... =P =] =D

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    November 17, 2008

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    this made me giggle a bit, it was definitely unique and very creative for this prompt, i liked that. the imagery was also nice.

    thanks for entering and goodluck