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Weeping Willow

They meet in secret, under the weeping willow
hidden by the leaves fluttering upon the summer's breeze
they say no words, just hold and touch,
as time stands still for their love.

With every caress he honours her frail beauty,
with every look she  lays bear her soul
two people from different worlds,
each-other they embrace, their spirits exposed.

Under the weeping willow...

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    Very good work here

    In sych a short piece you speak in volume and such a lovely read indeed .


  • HereComesTheSun
    November 10, 2008

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    this was a beautiful write each word painted a beautiful picture
    well deserved gold
    beautiful


  • sensualbutterfly
    November 10, 2008
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    Beautifully exquisite piece. So gentle and loving. Thank you for your entry