There's something you must know, and
It's driving me insane.
I really have to say it
For the good health of my brain.
It's tearing through my head
Leaving skidmarks here and there.
It's making me go crazy,
'Cause you need to be aware.
I know I'm being silly:
I should just spit it out,
But I'm having trouble telling you
What all this is about.
I practised in the mirror
A million times or more,
But I am just as nervous
As I did feel before.
Okay, I think I'm ready.
Please don't scream or cry,
When finally, I tell you...
"You forgot to zip your fly."
Author notes
teehee ^_^
A contest entry
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1200 points, ended November 28, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is hilarious! It's like you wresling w/ some incredible moral dilemma, and the truth is the person just has an unzipped fly!
rofl. *hysterical*
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hysterical ! ah to wrestle with the embarrassment of telling someone or letting them be embarrassed when the find out no one said anything.thank you for a good laugh
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gosh. i was thinking of you saying "i love you" from the beginning!! lolz. i love the twist!!!
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HaHAhAhahAaha!
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Haha, this is a fun and funny piece. Nice job on the rhyming. The colors do make it a bit hard on the eyes (for me anyway.) Best of luck in the contest.
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lol
Nice write! Good luck in the contest!
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