Sheltered,
I lie
in the lea of your arms,
Safe
in the knowledge
I am your child,
Forever Yours
Author notes
This is for the contest. Prompt 'Mother'
A contest entry
- meaning and emotion by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 10, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please let me know what you think. Thankyou xx
Comments
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beautifully descriptive... x
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beautiful "lea"
that word makes how this security stand out as adjusted intimately is needed for children, not inadequate becoming scary the way a grove simply unfamilar could be. there's that instinctive fright with even being reintroduced for visit (of hold) and we don't have to see complaint of providers having that special recognition but schedule of unison -- and natural ease as eating off land with breastfeeding efficiency etcetera to stay there...
the spaced out lines from that first stanza gives confidence of foundation for growing up without just memory as some had favorite first grade teacher but mother that home schooling can instill further in long leanings.
a tree house per se shields from thought of scratches through reoriented entries,
called Carolyn
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